AKA-38CAUTION's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cat Bear pens]

Nice!

[Candy Corn-chan wants your love]

Interesting

[The Super Mario]

Beautiful

[oooh woooo]

nice

[gain followers to build a platform to show off your work]

Don't trust mainstream media as your friends

[Simon]

Badass!
Growing up with Gurren Lagann, this is amazing!

[everyday life]

good

[B-DAY IVO]

Happy birthday!
Also, like that Deviantart logo on your shirt!

[Red Shygal.]

(I know it old work but I like to give feedback about it)
Hey, I not to give hate here but I here to give you least nice constructive feedback so don't be alarmed owo.

The pose is alright (It does have that erotic look) but the line art and color is a little bit off.

The line is a bit too thick and some lack of shading (unless it meant to be flat color, then fair enough :P)
If there bit shadow (For example the middle of the chest where the clothes are slight bending) then add a little bit of shading to making color somewhat more detail and alive.

The hair is bit flat, most hairs have some curl and some detail, to make it look like natural hair instead of play-doh hairs.

But that my point-of-view and feedback, I here to see what you can improve and such. I don't want people to think you did it in MS Paint and knowing you put some effort into it, but sometime a lot of effort won't hurt to try.

ThePrimaldino responds:

Still thank ya for the great feedback. Mean alot. =3

[MyHorsePrince]

Beautiful, I love it
wait, is it that game where the girl is dating a horse with an anime head?

DaButterB0y responds:

maybe