AKA-38CAUTION's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Red Shygal.]

(I know it old work but I like to give feedback about it)
Hey, I not to give hate here but I here to give you least nice constructive feedback so don't be alarmed owo.

The pose is alright (It does have that erotic look) but the line art and color is a little bit off.

The line is a bit too thick and some lack of shading (unless it meant to be flat color, then fair enough :P)
If there bit shadow (For example the middle of the chest where the clothes are slight bending) then add a little bit of shading to making color somewhat more detail and alive.

The hair is bit flat, most hairs have some curl and some detail, to make it look like natural hair instead of play-doh hairs.

But that my point-of-view and feedback, I here to see what you can improve and such. I don't want people to think you did it in MS Paint and knowing you put some effort into it, but sometime a lot of effort won't hurt to try.

ThePrimaldino responds:

Still thank ya for the great feedback. Mean alot. =3

[MyHorsePrince]

Beautiful, I love it
wait, is it that game where the girl is dating a horse with an anime head?

DaButterB0y responds:

maybe

[Squad Fam Out]

Even if it is outdated made a couple of years ago, I actually like it, giving some detail with the face, hair and the cloths.
This can help Pewdiepie win against T-series!

KMTZ responds:

Thanks heaps!

[Pandaren Mage]

Really liking the pose and color and amount of detail being added to Pandaren Mage!
Such a nice artwork!

Dez-Rambler responds:

Thank you I really appreciate hearing that.

[Busterize! Buster Green]

Nice work mate!

There some things I would like to point:

Have you tried shading? It put more of detail to Makoto, giving it more look and have some nice touch to it.
While I do like the Flat color and line art to it, adding little shading won't hurt to try. Don't Put too much though. ^u^

BeigePaladin responds:

yeah, some shade would help bring it too life, but the commission was for flat colours

I do intend to finish it at some point down the line when I have some spare time (since I like the charatcer/series) though :D

[Harpy]

I like the amount of detail you put for Harpy, even the fur (around the arm and thigh). Really like the style man! Keep it up!

JustDream responds:

Thanks, man! I really appreciate your feedback!

[RAINBOWSIX]

This is the most detail and the most well-done artwork I ever have seen.
The person has more realistic aspects, with tiny detail added in, making somewhat a real human!

This has to be the most underrated art I ever have seen, Amazing job!!

POLYCEPHALY responds:

Thanks!

[Heart throbbing]

I digging the color! Colorful and sparkling! The character is cute, actually remind me from the 90s anime I used to watch and remember.

Nice job!

MewkleDweamy responds:

thank u very much!!!

[reffy]

Nice job, keep it up the good work!

MewkleDweamy responds:

tysm!!